Friday, February 22, 2013

Scene Depiction: Alpha Phi Omega



I had originally heard about APO through a couple of my friends that were involved in it, so when I heard that we were doing this scene depiction essay I thought that this was a great time to check it out and see what APO was really about. APO stands for Alpha Phi Omega and it is a coed service fraternity that is open to anyone who wants to join. When most people think of sororities and fraternities they think of the main social ones, but there are also many other service and business fraternities on campus as well. I am in a sorority myself and I honestly didn’t know what to expect when it came to some of the other service and business fraternities on campus, because of this, I thought that this was a great time to go and check out APO.
The meeting that I decided to go to for APO was open to anyone and it was an information meeting for anyone who was interested in potentially joining. The fact that anyone could go to this meeting and that they were pretty easy to get ahold of made contacting this group much easier. The meeting was held in the student center in room 230. It was a pretty large room, not one of the small classrooms but a bigger lecture type room. The room was filled with row after row of chairs all lined up facing the front of the room. The front of the room had a big projection screen on the wall, a long table and a podium.

Taken from the UK Alpha Phi Omega twitter page

When I first walked in, people were just kind of milling around mingling and talking to one another. The room was pretty large and there were a good amount of people in it, I’d say it was about half full. The back of the room had windows all along the back wall which added to its inviting and friendly atmosphere. I made my way towards one of the seats in the back so I could take it all in. When the meeting came to a start there was a guy and a girl, the president and vice president, standing in front who started leading it. At the beginning of the meeting they welcomed everyone and started talking a little bit about the fraternity, what they stood for, what all they were involved in, and a brief description of the history. They told us about how APO is the largest coed service fraternity in the world and is not only at UK’s campus but a national organization with many other chapters across the US. They also said that Alpha Phi Omega was first chartered at UK in 1934 and went inactive for a little bit and then was rechartered in 1993. Next, they went into some of the events that APO is involved in both on and off campus. They talked about how APO will have a group of people participating in the upcoming Dance Blue marathon and also talked about some other different things that they had coming up such as after school tutoring and volunteering at God’s pantry. From looking at their schedule of upcoming events it looked like they have something going on for you to do just about every day of the week. Throughout the meeting they also had a power point going the whole time for people to look at. The power point had pictures on it and just explained what they were saying about the group’s history and what all they were involved in. It also had a section that went through all the people who had leadership positions in the chapter with their pictures and a brief description about them. As they went through each person they stopped to point some of them out in the crowd if they were there. There were kind of a wide variety of people at this meeting and I would say a pretty wide variety of people in APO in general but everyone there was really friendly to each other. Throughout the meeting people were mostly just quiet and listening in their seats but occasionally people would laugh or they would introduce someone from the crowd and you could tell just by the comrodery of the group as a whole that this was a pretty tight and fun group. Although people were quiet and respectful while they were up talking I would say that just by how the speakers presented the meeting that it was a pretty relaxed and friendly atmosphere. They made me and anyone else that was new immediately feel welcome. As the meeting progressed they also went into detail about all of the different things that were required for membership. There was a list of things you had to do including going to a meeting, a couple of service events, and there was also an $80 fee that you had to pay in order to join. Finally, they talked about all of the benefits of joining APO such as the friends they’ve made, all the events there are to get involved with and the benefit you feel from helping the community. 

Taken from the UK APO website- http://www.apoonline.org/alphazeta/

As the meeting started to come to an end they announced that there were cookies and drinks in the back for anyone that wanted some and there was also a display board in the back with pictures of different things that the group had done. The display was a trifold presentation board with pictures and descriptions on it and then they also had some pamphlets and things sitting on the table.  After the meeting, people still stood around talking to each other and I think this really says something about how close this group is. I made my way to the back to grab a cookie and drink and took a minute to look at the display of different things they have done. I eventually made my way out the door but there were many people still inside chatting when I left.

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Writing Workshop Feedback




During the peer review I pretty much just let them read my paper. I didn’t really explain what I was writing about before hand. I wasn’t able to make mine too detailed yet because my meeting wasn’t until that night. When I was reviewing papers I helped Kendall out with her into, she started in with the action too quickly and needed more of an intro to set the scene. Overall I think peer review was semi helpful although it was kind of hard because both me and Kendall hadn’t been able to go to our meetings yet.

Monday, February 18, 2013

Peer Review



I think overall peer review is pretty helpful, the goal of peer review is to get comments and feedback on your paper to make sure you’re going in the right direction. I like peer review because I think sometimes it is more relaxed and easier to get feedback from people your own age before you turn it in, rather than to just get comments back from the teacher. I think groups for peer review should be kept pretty small to no more than two or three other people. This is the best way to just take a couple of people’s advice and use what they said to help better your paper. I would also prefer to pick my own group for peer review, because I think it’s easier to give constructive feedback to someone you already know as opposed to someone you don’t know at all. I think peer review is most helpful when people give you big tips for the structure of your paper or overall how it’s going instead of just saying yeah that’s good or just giving minor grammar or spelling corrections. I would rather them be more honest and have me do better than them not give back much feedback at all. Finally, coming from the other side I think as a reviewer it is important to be able to tell what their topic is, and overall what they are trying to say with their paper in order to give them tips on the best ways to improve it.

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Scene Depiction



 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPjYhPGkhGA&list=PLFB1642F673C8D2A6

For my scene depiction I chose a scene from the movie The Blind Side. This scene is close to the beginning but I think it is one of the most influential and one of the main turning points in the movie. This scene takes place alongside of a road at night. Even though it is dark the scene isn’t scary but the darkness and fog creates kind of a calming, secluded atmosphere. Although it isn’t raining in this scene it appears to be a pretty cold and rainy night. The scene starts off by the dad, Sean Tuohy, pulling the car to a quick hault along the side of the road. Michael, a big black guy is walking along the side of the road in a t-shirt and shorts and the mom, Leigh Ann Tuohy, gets out to see where he’s going.  She is dressed pretty nicely and in high heels, and although she immediately starts off aggressively asking him questions, you can tell she means well underneath. Although Michael is a big guy he talks to her with his head down and seems very shy and scared. After asking some more questions about what he was doing and if he had any where to stay that night, Leigh Ann pauses for a minute to consider what to do, looks back at the car that her son and husband have stayed in, and then decides to take him back to their house and let him stay there for the night.